Wow, that was great! I loved how light hearted it was. And the sympathy Lois felt for his fear was nice. It's always frustrating when someone lives a song that just annoys you to no end... And I second DC, you should totally do it
Thanks! Glad you liked it! Tried to give Lois a snapshot into his head so she wouldn't just go off the deep end. Sympathetic Lois is nice.
Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain
