You have set yourself a mighty task, Folc. It will not be easy to maintain the tension in such a dramatic story over the long haul, but I'm sure you can handle it. I won't leave comments on this yet - I have to go back and reread Delusions of Grandeur, since I don't remember it that well. Just from glancing at the previous tale, though, it appears that you've expanded on the ending quite a bit. And that's not a complaint, I assure you. I just hope I can carve out enough time to get it done soon. Please continue with Injustice - from this little taste, it looks really good.
Got an idea of length yet?
