What an amazing story. You sent us on a roller coaster ride of emotional highs and lows. Your writing is beautiful and very compelling. I'm glad you tackled this story. I remember when the episode first aired that I also thought the solution the show offered crazy and totally inappropriate. You certainly fixed that.
Great ending and hope you write more.
Cuidadora
"Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor
"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly
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