Hey Ray,
Don't worry, I'm sure several People are reading your Story. My experience is that many of them either don't know what to write or don't find the time or the muse for commenting. And there is a big Group that will wait with Feedback (or even with reading) until the Story is finished. As for me, I like the Story so far and I'm interested where you going with Lara and the rest of the characters. And for some strange reason I have a Feeling that Lara and Lois didn't meet for the last sime here. :-)
