I think that's the first fanfic I ever read where Star playes a major part - or any part at all. I think most people don't like her. Personally, I think she is the best aspect of the episode Contact. In my opinion you have portrayed her quite well. Thank you!
The declaration of love from Nottinghill was the first that came to my mind as well. It fit well with Lois and Clark. Thank you for such a great story!