I'm awful at feedback, so I'm making an effort to fix that.

My favorite line is:

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And the most important thing,” he recited, “ the one part of the story that we all must remember and pass down from generation to generation is that nobody yelled hysterically at anybody.

I'd imagine Lois was the one who made sure this part was in the tale. Excellent, Queenie. Really good.


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing