I like this snippet of a story. But as Supesfan said, you cannot seriously consider this finished, can you? So many questions left unanswered. How did Lois end up in the middle of nowhere? Will she survive?
Come back here!
No, seriously, this was touching, and angsty and great and I'd love to read more. But if this is all you give us, that's fine too. After all, it's your story.
