That was cute! Though I wish it was longer, it went by like water!
I definitely wasn't able to guess anything! There were too many twists and turns, including... Lois thinking Clark might be in love with Superman! Hahahah! I don't know if there are other fics with that premise anywhere, but you may need to explore that idea!
I also loved the way Lois handled her rejection from Clark! And I loved the way she revealed to him she knew who he was, with all the details she spoke about him. That was heartwarming!
As for my favourite lines... hmm... I told you which are my favourite scenes, but as far as single lines go, I'll pick this one:
“I’m sure he’ll find you and talk to you soon.” Because he’s a damn lovesick fool.
because I love the way Clark talks snark about himself!
Keep up the good work!
Love,
AnnaBtG.
