Thanks, Maria. I posted part 1 two days ago on two different message boards, and you're the only one who gave me feedback.
I was expecting a cool welcome to that story, since, like I said, it begins VERY SLOWLY, but not that cool.
Anyway,I'm glad you liked it.
And I hope you'll stay with me until the end. I personally thinks that my story becomes a little better with each patr, and I think I'm prejudiced
Part 2 is coming
