Hey, poussin! I know I've already given you feedback, but there were a couple of things to clear up:
First off, I asked about beta reading and got some really good advice so I can better beta the rest of the chapters.
Secondly...I really like this part
“Really. We’re not together. We don’t have that kind of relationship. She’s not my girlfriend. She’s just a friend. Sure, she’s a girl…”
Clark reminds me of my nephew! "She's a friend. I mean, she's a girl, and she's my friend, but she's not my girlfriend!" So cute!
And thirdly, when I said interaction, I just meant LnC banter. I was just surprised they hadn't had a conversation yet in the story, I wasn't talking about them getting physical or anything. Anyway, I'm excited to see what you've got in store for our bumbling superhero and his "not!" girlfriend
