Okay, how long before Lois starts adding up all the "special things" Clark has done and starts wondering aloud to him how he's able to do all that? Will he try to shut down her inquiries? If so, I doubt that would work. Will he then try to pull back on the relationship using the "long distance" excuse? And will Lois call his bluff? And will Lana intervene and threaten to murder him (again!) if he ruins the relationship? Will Cat encourage Lois to take a leave of absence and park herself in Clark's extra bedroom for a few weeks until he surrenders?
I haven't mentioned yet how much I enjoy the way you alternate the POV by chapter. We get Lois' thoughts, then Clark's thoughts, then Lois', then Clark's, and it's wonderful. You've found a sweet spot for this tale, and the narration is just about flawless. I don't dislike WAFFy tales, but I am enjoying the daylights out of this one. I'm very glad you two decided to post a chapter each day.
By the by, how is the next lengthy segment coming? Are y'all at least half-done with it yet? And will you start posting it the day after this one ends?
Please?!?
