Great! I love the way you wrote the Big Discovery and also the portraying of the feelings of Matt and "Letour"!
He'd informed her, somewhat testily, that both Letour and Jor-El were as stubborn as each other and had refused to leave until Jor-El did another search of the area, just to be sure there was no one left who could be saved....
“Which, lassie, is a totally daft notion!” Mac had declared, stomping into the house and stripping off his outer clothes, leaving dirty puddles on her floor, which was already filthy due to all the traffic that had passed through during this dreadful night and day. “Can they no see that a'body who's still under that muck cann'ae still be breathing? It's been too long... much too long....” Mac's shoulders drooped and his voice ended on a gulping, tearing intake of breath. “Letour's goin' tae make himsel' ill, Marje, and he isn'ae a well man to begin with.... And I mightn'ae know all there is tae know about superheros, but I'm thinkin' Jor-El's no that invulnerable either. He's pushed himsel' tae his limits, if ye were tae ask me... not that anybody is askin' me.... Both their hearts are breakin'. Ye can see it in their eyes....”
Letour and Jor-El are as stubborn as each other?
And at the end of this "Both their hearts are breakin'... My heart nearly broke, too!
So Matt´s secret (and Clark´s secret as well) is out... What will they do with it? I can´t imagine them telling all the world about it! They are Clark´s friends! Very interesting...
And when Matt returns home... first he will get a some trouble with his mother because of him leaving on a school day - and then... oh, I can´t wait for it!
I love your writing!
