He fell silent, wondering if she had put it together. However, she still remained quiet. He suspected she wanted him to say it.
“I’m Superman,” he said finally.
Its not very often that Clark is able to say those two words. In many fics he is interrupted or Lois blurts it out, taking away any chance Clark might have of stating his case. So glad in your short story that is not the case. Considering the fact that it took so long for him to gather up the courage to admit the truth, rightfully he should have been allowed to do so.
Only one complaint, wasn't it raining the whole time? Why would Lois want to go flying and risk getting stuck by lightening?
