Well, as I told you in chat, this rights a wrong that bugs me SOOOOOO much!
Silly Clark shooting himself in the foot by encouraging her as Superman… dancing on air, romantic atmosphere, closing the window??? I know he can’t help himself sometimes, but OOF. Anyway…that’s why I was thrilled to have that inner voice pipe up and get him to do the right thing!
You write it well! We’re right with him when he’s so wrapped up in the moment and doesn’t want to stop. I loved it! From the kisses to the touches and the dialogue! What a great little revelation.
And then the kicker that made me LOL irl… the line about the kinky fantasies.
And I adore that she tells him to shut her up by kissing her. So cute!
Congrats on posting your first story to the boards! I sure hope this is the first of many that we see from you!
Sara
