HOLY COW, woman! I started off just jotting some general notes of fdk I wanted to give, as you can see below. And then…well, I had to hold back because I could almost just comment on every sentence and phrase!
The details are so good! They really let you immerse in the environment and time period!
She was blue-lipped, shaking, and covered in blood, with at least one set of teeth marks that he could see among the bruises; but her eyes were wild with victory, and with the hand that wasn’t carrying a rabbit, she dragged behind her the carcass of a wolf.
Mad Wolf.
The name suited her.
Ahahaha!! I snorted aloud at this! Such a visceral image, then bam!
She was becoming reckless, and reckless hunters never grew old. It seemed that whenever she was lonely, she would disappear longer and return with bigger game and more injuries.
Oh wow, I love this! I can’t exactly say why…something about wistful and wanderlust and FEELS.
When the moon had shrunk to a faint sliver,
Is it wrong that I’m almost mad at how good these details are? All these little things that bring into the environment and time, like I said above. These little details so innocently woven in here… genius.
Whatever he was, he looked like a man.
“Certainly seems to have all the parts of a man…” echoes in my head.
And OMG OMG… just… the WHOLE LAST FIVE PARAGRAPHS… it’s all so amazing and perfect! GAHHHHHH.
GAH! Sara
