“You’d think Franklin Stern owns the bowling alley or something with all the bowling events he makes us do!”
No, he’s just really into tall white plastic figures.
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Nice one!
Their banter is great. Just got done watching HiM, so this feels really well captured.
Thank you!! I love it when I can hit the banter just right…and usually I feel like I can’t quite claim credit for it because it feels like I’m just dictating what they say in my head. (Well, then again…that’s mostly how I write, anyway, but usually when the banter happens, they’re talking so fast that my fast typing speed can’t even keep up!
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Aww, I think the pheromones would have a far more…profound and insistent effect on her now than they had a year ago.
EGADS if that isn’t a damn bunny… what would happen if PML had happened LATER, like pre-dating/early-relationship???????
Those are really great fun. You do realize this series is turning more and more into an episodic story than a series of 824 word vignettes, right? I’m just saying, you me need to finish this story sometime down the line and also start a new series of vignettes to actually match the homework assignment
Which in no way, shape, or form would result in more fun ficlets to be read and such considerations to not influence this reader’s thinking while writing FDK.
Shhhhhhhh
And as for "why bowling"...Maybe because it's Thanksgiving-season and bowling has a Turkey in it? Too much Flintstones or Al Bundy? Because it's the total opposite of what Lois considers sophisticated? Because there's no chance of running into Lex's zombie while at bowling? Because resurrlexted Lex as a head has smooth, round, and shiny as a bowling ball?
“Why bowling?” … the answer actually is “Because AnnieM went bowling with her kids and had a discussion on the ethics of using superpowers while bowling, and then she asked for a plot bunny.
” But the REAL question is: why the heck are bowling stories so adorable???
Thanks for all the feedback!!
Sara
