Carrie—Thank you!! I have to give that line all to SuperBek! I was trying desperately to think of what she would say in that moment…knowing it would be something revelatory…but I was stumped! So we started goofing…and she said that…and a few mins later, I told Bek it was totally happening!
Bek—Oh my! This totally wouldn’t have happened without you! And I had so much fun too!!
Thank you so much for your help!
Queen—Hee! I’ll try, anyway!! Thanks!!
Toomi—Thanks!! Sometimes I just adore having the “reverse revelation”!
Michael—I feel like you’re joking, but I kinda want to count to see if that’s right!
Hahahaha at the Lois/Clark/Cat dialogue about me still playing even though I’ve now won.
YAY! I’m so glad you loved the hand on her back calming her. Anyone who knows me well, knows I’m a COMPLETE SUCKER for the hand on the small of her back thing… and when I realized I could use it here like this?? Gah!!
Re: the heat from his body… um… yup. No comment?
Let’s just say that I mildly considered adding slightly more of an allusion to that, but felt it didn’t fit quite yet.
But you read Intoxicated, so you’re totally not wrong in knowing that I was definitely thinking that.
I really loved all the comments, thank you!!!
I’m sure I have read
I is for Illusions by Pam at some point… I feel like I read almost all her stuff… but I might have to re-read now!
Part 5? Um… it’s a WIP. Plotting snags. But…there should be 1-2 more minimum. The one that’s snagging would be a addition to that number.
Anna—YES! Love that you loved that because it was totally not how I envisioned writing it…I was going to parcel it out through the story, but then it all lumped together, and I worried it wouldn’t play the same! So I’m glad you loved it! And yeah… they were pretty much telling me they had to kiss then. I *might* have been able to talk them out of it…
And YAY! I definitely love that pair of lines… because she KNOWS it’s “just” Clark…but at the same time, she IS making out with Superman.
And… issue a new challenge? Um… talk to me after January? Otherwise, you can challenge me to finish the other fics I need to finish…
PuffyTiger—um… SHHHHHHH. Don’t tell anyone you’re on to me! The facade that Sara can write short stories will CRUMBLE!!
Thank you, everyone, for such lovely and amazing feedback!
Sara
