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Well, as you know… I finally caught up to where you’ve posted last night (er… 2am… )

OMG was the build up ever worth it! EGADS, woman! I’m not even sure where to start with FDK, so I’ll just… start with the easy and first chapter:

Ch 22—I love that this Clark gets to accomplish something so great and actually get the thanks of world leaders. He so very much deserves it! And the BEST part of the chapter is, of course, that even after all that, jogging with Lois is the highlight of his day!! SQUEEEE!!

Ch 23—okay, so I always feel weird using this word because it’s just a wonky word…but OMG was I on tenterhooks the WHOLE time! So eager yet so scared to find out what exactly was going on! THAT KISS! Omg that was everything! So good! And I’m so, SO glad, especially knowing the truth now, that he’d been able to resist kissing her and vice versa until now because… whoa. And I 1,000,000% love that she KNOWS right away that it wasn’t this Clark because there’s no room for that kind of drama in this fic (at least not right now…hopefully not later? ) You do all the feelings and tension and narrative crafting all SO WELL!!

Ch 24–LOVE the description of him going into the sun…and omg can I just say how brilliant this idea is? Because… OF COURSE…throw his body into the sun because we don’t want clones and all the things… but OMG SUN AND HEALING!!! Again…all the emotions here are just… GAHHHHHH. So much GAH!

But now that THIS reveal is through…

OMG WHY DOES IT STILL HURT HIM???

AND WHAT’S GOING TO HAPPEN TO MY POOR ALTCLARK???

Sara (who is very much enjoying the torturous angst ride!!)