As I'm sure others have said, this is an excellent story! I'm a reader who only reads completed stories so, now that I've finished it, I want to comment. Your story kept me in suspense and I would regretfully put it down at the end of the day looking forward to the next day when I could continue in this universe. The first half of the story had me rooting for Lois to, slowly, come to love Alt-Clark. He seemed so very happy to be with her but then that universes Clark is introduced and my hopes were dashed.Alt-Clark has done an excellent job of hiding his feelings for Lois while supporting her and Clark. I wonder how he's going to deal with being Superman most of the time and how H.G. Wells will factor into this development. I look forward to part 2 and, maybe, a part 3 depending on what happens in part 2.
Thanks for writing and sharing your story!
Ray Reynolds
