Sweet little one shot, and yeah, he better tell her soon!
Thank you for the feedback, Blueowl. Yes, he better tell her.
I really liked this story CarrieRene! I appreciated the descriptive detail in this piece. Very well done.
Looking forward to more. Thank you.
P.S. I think your banners actually add something to the story also. Maybe the visual enhances the readers sense of integration into the scene? Anyway, keep up the good work.
Thank you, Penny_Lane. I have to thank ksarasara for some of the detail. She helped me along with my oldest child. And I didn't like this banner as much as the previous one, but I think it does help visual where I am going.
Well, you already got my detailed feedback, but I just wanted to pop in and say again that I really, really love this idea of yours to do a ficlet for every New Year’s! Such a great idea and the two you’ve got so far are SO SWEET!!
Sara
You know how much I love reading your comments on the edits. We never got a New Year's with them, so I thought why not. I am going to try two of them for next week unless I just write the fourth one for the following week. Thank you though, it helps with the holidays.
