I just finished the story today and I also want to congratulate you on a well-written story with a lot of character twists along with some very familiar ones. Lois was great, and very inventive, throughout the story. From her being able to even find Clark where Trask had kept him to using cell phone data to track him down later. I liked that she also had such a positive reaction to Clark from the beginning which only grew stronger as the story progressed. How he developed his powers was a nice change of pace and very inventive, as was the Nightfall resolution. Too bad our Clark listened to EPRAD about crashing into it. Though I do disagree about Plan 2. I think pushing it out of Earth's orbit would work as well but yours was certainly novel.
Thanks so much for taking the time to write and share it with me and the board.
Ray
