Wow! What a great surprise to find more feedback after all this time!
Crystal - How could I have missed your brilliant comments?! Thank you so, so much! You've pointed out some of my favorite lines there, and I'm so glad you liked the ending.
DJ - Thanks for the email and thanks for bringing this thread back to the top, else I wouldn't have seen Crystal's comments!
Woody - That's a huge compliment, Woody! Thank you!
Sara (floating on a happy cloud

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