So good! I really like how it's from Jon's perspective and how he's seeing snippets of his dad and the little clues he's not percieving that's throughout.
Can't wait for more!
Telling it from Jon's perspective is fun as an author! Challenging though, cuz it's more limited -- there's so much he doesn't know!
I love how Jon can hear/sense his mother's doubts. Hopefully he won't be as mad at her when she tells him...looking forward to part 3!
Chapter 3 coming up!
Thanks for the FDK!
-Bek
