Originally Posted by SuperBek
whinging

Nooo!!!! I hope Lois is wrong, but I suspect she's not and.... whinging what a cliffhanger!!

Amazing chapter, really, but...I don't know how we're gonna wait a whole week for the next one!!

-Bek

Yeah, sorry about that cliffhanger. I didn't even have that part in mind before several readers reminded me that Lois talking the kryptonite with her was bound to have some repercussions. And here we are...

Originally Posted by Songbird
I hope Lois is wrong about Clark but if she isn’t, maybe this will be the cure for his hiccups. Well, I can hope.

At the very least it's a piece of the puzzle on their journey to a solution to Clark's problem.

Originally Posted by drdeathdefying
Ooh... the plot thickens! It's really interesting to see this scene with them at a different point in their relationship

It was fun to write the PML scenes in a state of their relationship where it was almost a given that Lois would have consented to intimacy even if she hadn't been influenced by the pheromones. I don't think I have ever seen that in a fic. But I could be wrong about that.

Thank you all so much for reading and giving feedback.


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