Michael,
This story is highly addictive. You have a very vivid style
My blush deepens. Thank you so much!
Of course. They wouldn’t bring a dame to a business meeting at the docks.
That seems to obvious when you say it, and I didn't even think of that.
Obviously the docks aren't a hot Metropolis date spot.
Was this one unbelievable? I know our nearly limitless hero is capable of just dipping down with her, but with the 'fast' caveat coming up, and the fact that he's teasing her a bit, I was hoping I could get away with it.
It was probably more painful than carrying kryptonite.
Ooof, that one hurt
me.
She’s very self-aware, that one
Let's call it a work in progress
Thank you, thank you!
So awkward if the boxes contained kryptonite.
I laughed out loud at this. Now I really want to see that happen.
SO awkward.
One if the most adorable Loises ever!
Aw, thank yoooouuuu. Just don't tell
her that, or she'll think she can get away with even more than she does!
“I told you that you wouldn’t like it fast,” his voice said into her ear.
THANK you for popping this one! I felt like this was my naughtiest tidbit in the story (and a favorite!), and I wasn't sure it played. V happy that it does.
Oh boy. You made it sound like she was healing and now you’re pulling the blanket away. Very well done!
Thank you, Dr. Beckett. And I truly wonder how far she could have healed without him. A broken bone will knit, but if it isn't set properly, you're still going to have damage that might leave it ultimately unworkable.
Yeah, that’s gonna come back to haunt him.
OH, YEAH! Big time. When they can't be together, they just haunt each other.
Okay, sorry for all the repetitive gushing
I'm a writer - that's never something to apologize for!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!
