Originally Posted by bakasi
Another tense chapter. Things look grim for Clark and I'm not sure he does himself a favor by keeping Lois at arm's length. It's an understandable reaction of course. Can't wait to see how you'll wriggle him out of this one. Is he going to pull a Richard Kimble?

Thank you, bakasi. No, Clark will not turn into Richard Kimble. I had to think about that for a second, on who that was. He will get out of it and once again Lois will push her way in.

Originally Posted by Morgana
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“So not only was Mr. Kent in love with you, he was also angry with Luthor for losing his job, the Daily Planet, and his friends, and he blamed Luthor for the Planet’s destruction. He had more than one motive,” the captain said as he tapped his pencil on the pad of paper. “Thank you, Ms. Lane. Given all of this and the gun my officers just found in the dumpster behind Mr. Kent’s apartment, I think I have enough now.”

Lois froze with uncertainty. They’d found a gun in the dumpster behind Clark’s apartment? How? Why? None of this made sense.

“Enough…for what?” Lois asked nervously.

Benson smiled at her. “Enough to charge your friend with murder.”

Ouch! Is this a set-up or what? Never watched SVU, still Benson is no joke...

Mayson was very cold. Will we be seeing her again.

Can't help but think that the reference to yellow writing pads is important.

Neatly crafted case Carrie. Do we really have to wait a week for the next installment? frown

Yes, very tense. I have been trying to post the chapters as early as possible since they are done. Yes, we will be seeing Mayson again. I am so glad you like this, Morgana.