The story is really cool! Only two problems: Cannot imagine Lois' behaving this way after she and Clark are married. She has grown past Mad Dog Lane behavior. Cannot dream of Clark not telling Lois about Lori's unique background, he respects her too much for that.

Nonetheless, I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Yay!

Last edited by Morgana; 10/13/23 03:41 PM.
Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.