Okay, well Caroline hit the nail on the head... there are so many of
"those sentences that made me go, "Oooh. I wish I'd written that!"" Actually, my first reaction is more of a gasp and then an AWWWWW!!
And yet, in his bed, his body above her, she had felt that he was still the same: caring, honest, truthful, painfully in love with her.
Oh, how I LOVE the "painfully in love with her." I love the whole sentence, but that phrase is just... perfect.
It seemed as though he no longer cared. Or perhaps, in his heart, he was already in a place where the truth no longer stood between them.
Beautiful sentence!
Her initial anger had dissipated once she’d realized that his not telling her had little to do with her and everything to do with him.
How true is this?! Wow.
And Caroline and Ann already quoted the rest of what I'd wanted to.
Beautifully written, C_A!!!
Sara
