ahh, I'll see if I can do the quotey thing.

Me too! IDK why...

I feel the same!!

Dark? Not at all. Talk about fresh and different, there are a myriad of directions this can go in. Brava!
Thanks! Yeah, I've tried writing more...but idk.
Oh boy! I am loving this. I'm so glad you decided to join us here. I wish there was more though!
Thanks! Maybe there will be more. But I doubt it.

I've tried writing more and plotted out a whole bunch of things I would include but I creeped myself out and ultimately couldn't figure out how to get rid of you-know-who (I'm not good at A-plotty stuff).
Off to a wonderful start, because this really can't end here. Welcome to the boards. So great to have you here. (also, ack, Lois pregnant with Luthor's child? You sure she didn't get a nightly visit from an alien who didn't know what he was doing?)
I know, gross.

Let's hope that's what happened.

This was greatly done!! Congrats on your first fic!!
Very, very interesting setup! I'm going to consider this the introduction to an AU where the Happily Ever After just happens a little bit later...

Yes! I love that idea! Thanks for reading!