I agree with Anna that "because" is better than "b/c".
The word "news", however, is treated as singular in English, so you are correct when you say "this news".
And, while we're on the subject of grammar, let me say that your beta is doing a good job. Your story is easier to read, and yet it still sounds like *you*, if you know what I mean. I'm glad because I really do enjoy the way you write.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
| 
