Some nice L/C interactions we have here. It's clear both have feelings for the respective other. And Clark's descriptions are all very vidid, I get the iimpressoin you either speak from own experiences or are really good to fake it. Generally, the dialogues are very
2you" in the writing. Hard to explain, but I would have totally guessed its one of your fics if it were in a ficathon. Wonder how long it will take Lois to get her curiosity get the better of her and ask Clark or Martha what happened to Jonathan.
Also, something tells me Clark is more category 3 than he wants to admit (maybe even to himself). The fact it took him so long to answer also is an indicator for this.
Anyway, looking forward to the next part I'll gonna read tomorrow.
Nick


Up, up and away - to the next fanfic.