I think this was always my favourite segment of the story as I've read it so far, Kae. It's just beautifully written, with such wonderful turns of phrase and a rich sense of atmosphere.

You convey Lois's loneliness and sense of unease with Lex and the lifestyle he's given her wonderfully. I can see her so clearly, rattling around that huge, sumptuous but sterile penthouse. So very claustrophobic.

And I just love Dave. All of your original characters, in fact, are so solid, real. The dialogue in the scene between Dave and Lois just sparkles.

And then of course...Lex. shock I think your take on him has to be one of the downright creepiest I've seen. He just oozes menace overlaid with charm. <shudder>

More, Kae, and soon, please! I'm loving this.

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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers