Annie and Kathy,
I don't think you need to add anything at all. I thought it was a good idea to leave what was going to happen (and we all know what will happen -- they will get together, conversations, smoochies, revelations, etc), but it is left up to the reader's imagination. I actually sort of like it that way better. We can imagine how we want each of those conversations to go -- on our own.
I think that if you guys had added any more, your story wouldn't end on such an original note. I loved your story because it was so unique I just don't see what you guys could have possibly missed that would need an epilogue/sequel... You've left us with a feeling that things are going to work out -- and i think that's more than enouh to end on.
I absolutely love the last line about Lois being intoxicated by his kisses -- i thought that was a perfect closure because it is a different intoxication but it brings the story full-circle wonderfully. I also think that some of the impact of the final line would be lost if you went any further.
Just my 2 cents
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- Alicia
