“Good morning,” he said, shooting her a full-throttle smile that lit up the room.
What a perfectly weak-in-the-knees description!
Lois put a hand on his chest, just down from his shoulder. "There’s no point wasting time.”
I feel like this gesture is lifted perfectly from the show, to fit in this AU.
Riding on the ATV would be jerky and rough.
He would moderate that.
He's just such a gentleman! Even in his argument against this vehicle in the section above.
It affected so much of what they did.
That's quite a forfeit to living under the sword of damocles. So sad.
Because her son was in love with Lois.
Ope! Well, Martha hasn't lost this gift in her grief! So fun!
“How could I know with you going so slowly?” she asked. Then she grinned at him, flip-flopping his heart in his chest.
I love how well you're able to maintain her character in this totally different setting. It's really one of the best fish out of water stories I've read, and it really feels like she's going to stay. (Or at least has even capacity for growth that she COULD stay.)
Seeing the alfalfa, a few began to trot, and the rest followed.
I really love herd animals, lol. Most of the time.
Clark wondered if there was anything he could suggest that would cause her to baulk.
I really want him to test it! But this is such a steady, thoughtful interpretation of the character that I don't think he would.
He watched, glasses lowered, ready to shoot heat at any steer that threatened Lois’s safety.
Awww.
I really love the way you walk us through so many aspects of this life! It also feels like it's really giving Lois a chance to test it out!
