Ray
I've been beta-reading this story since the beginning and it's been a wild ride, buckle up and enjoy!

My goodness this has been a ride! With more fun to come. shock

Bakasi
Poor Clark, trapped among his fellow Kryptonians and poor Lois who's left alone in Metropolis. I wonder how Clark's abduction will turn out. Curious to see how this continues.

Clark is going to be enmeshed in a culture he barely understands, fighting a war that is not his. Lois has to deal with a lonely existence without the man she loves and yet...

UltraWoman
Abducting Clark is a great idea to keep people from suspecting the truth. But I hope he's not gone for long. grovel

This is the first in a long line of problems our favorite reporting duo has to contend with. Thanks so much one and all for your comments, they are appreciated.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.