So glad you took us off the cliff!

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A voice shouted out simultaneously, “MPD!”

Henderson?

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“Lois?”

She blinked. That voice didn’t have an English accent. It sounded like gravel.

“Bill?” she squeaked out incredulously.

Yes!

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“You ever see a panicked superhero?” He tossed a tight grin at her.

Best line in the chapter! dance

Wow! That kiss! Hubba, Hubba!

We are getting so close to the end here. I really want to know just how you are going to wrap this all up.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.