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“Nope! Not gonna happen, not when I'm this close to finally getting rid of that sickeningly saccharine society that your brain-dead family barfed up.”

Nice triple alliteration.

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Lilly was floating. She hovered above the prone bodies of her family members, her pale skin having taken on a greenish tint, and her eyes held an eerie, emerald glow.

Ah, weird sun-sickness reacts differently to kryptonite.

Hmm... Hopefully this means they'll figure out someway for Lilly to stay on Earth?

Can't wait to read more.