Well done chapter!
I especially like the way you describe the interaction between Jake and our favorite reporters. I could actually 'hear' the conversation between that. Yes, he is far too young to grow up without his father. The impression is that the poor man lost his way and felt avoiding Livia and his son was for the best.
UltraWoman rummaging through Clark's jacket was hilarious! Then she picks them up and flies to Butler Street. Talk about impulsive!
Next chapter.
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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