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"Should we split up?" Lois suggested.
"No, it’s better if we stay together," Clark insisted.
So, they began to explore each room, starting with the first one. The first five were identical, desperately empty, except for the spiders that had taken up residence there.

Wow! With a minimum of words I could see how deserted and creepy the place is. No wonder Ultra Lois and Clark insisted on going in there as a team.

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The sound of Clark’s tapping changed. Ultrawoman looked up, leaving the drawer she had just opened, from which a red glow was emanating. She shut the drawer and walked over to Clark, pulling him toward her and kissing him passionately.

Ooops! Now might not be the time or place for kisses and cuddles.

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"Now that we’ve got what we came for, we should get out of here as quickly as possible," Lois said, taking the lead.
"Yeah, good idea," Ultrawoman agreed. "I’ll go first."

Yes! Let's concentrate on the case at hand.

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.