Excellent description of a fire nearly going out of control. As I read each line, the flames became higher and the stakes more impressive. You handled UltraWoman's emotions perfectly! This part was a fantastic job of writing. Bravo!
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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