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Thanks for another terrific chapter! It’s nice that Pete is looking out for Lois during Clark’s absence. Pete is right that Talmadge wouldn’t want to tangle with Clark later.

The interview was interesting. I wasn’t expecting the twist that Elden was embezzling money and that a coding error caused the patient bills not to be paid. Embezzling money from the Churches wasn’t smart and he very well could be dead.

Talmadge is smart not to like the tone of Lois’s voice. He’s going to find out how hard it is to keep Lois Lane safe!

Pete is the brother that Clark never had. Its a shame the character keeps getting ignored which is why I put him in stories whenever possible. Better for Paul Talmadge to tangle with Dr. Ross than a certain Kryptonian.

Simcoe is a creep, but he does respect Elden's computer skills, if not his common sense. More on that later.

Next chapter might not be posted until next week. Sorry! whinging

Last edited by Morgana; 12/22/24 11:21 AM.
Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.