This story gave me chills and yes, taking a shower came to mind as well. Leo Nunk is a sad excuse for a human being, the other muck rakers were not much better. It took much courage for Lois to go outside for a walk, knowing such creatures were lurking about.

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The events after the wedding replay in my mind - a bittersweet symphony of what-ifs and regrets.

Fantastic. Sentences like this really draw me into the story. Lois is suffering on so many levels!

Why didn’t Perry take her somewhere else?

Where is Clark?

Next part please. Want to see where you take this.

Last edited by Morgana; 01/07/25 01:15 PM. Reason: Edits

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.