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Lois gasped as her worst fear was confirmed—a kryptonite trap.
“Oh dear, I seem to have chosen the wrong color. What a shame! But I’m sure he’s polite enough not to mind.”

Mindy's 'voice' is so easy to hear with this one line. She is more than a little twisted.

Like the pace of this part, from Lois being kidnapped to her conversation with Mindy. Like the cliffhanger! Everything is happening so quickly!

Onto the next chapter.


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.