This is fantastic. Romance, mystery, comedy, snappy dialogue, all wrapped up in one extremely well written story. Loved this:
Her face splits in a grin before she quickly tones it down to a smirk. "You're good, Clark. Very good."
"You'd be the best judge of that now, wouldn't you?"
Heh heh. I like the sexual innuendo--we didn't get too much of that on the show and you do it in a way so that it's still in character, at least in my opinion.
Very good! (No pun intended
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There are footsteps in the hallway behind me. I turn around to see Lois in the doorway, her face set in an inscrutable mask.
"Lose something?" she asks.
Uh-oh. Man, Clark. You're screwed. And not in a good way.
More please!
