Really nice. Kaethel you are an amazing writer, even if this story feels somewhat pending.

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And if you guys have ideas or suggestions please feel free to share them. They might wake the Muse, which is staying a bit silent these days.
What are you looking for? plot? twists?

I suggested you did something with Carlin. It would be really L&C if Luthor turns out to be a bigamist.
I like it when Luthor is written smart and oblique. In Wendys second thoughts Clark gets a job offer in another city with substantial salary increase, when this doesn't work his parents suddenly need to pay back the loans on their farm. This is how I think Lex mind works.
Or in Thompsons first comes marriage Luthor feeds Lois the image of Clark as a serious womanizer. Hitting her in her greatest insecurity.

Something devilish, Lex is like your classic mafia boss. He doesn't throw tantrums he just smiles and find a way to even the score.

I do know you, and I know you wouldn't lie... at least to me...most of the time...