Excellent ending! It was interesting how the 'revision' of history involved not only Lucas Peregrine (still love the name!), the nineteenth century Kryptonian, but Lois and Clark and their personal history, along with Emily's opinions concerning Superman. And Clark having to knock on his own door and 'rewind' his conversation with Lois? Priceless.

I only hope there's a wedding in the near future for these two, preferable before Lois becomes super-pregnant. I also hope there's more in the near future from such a talented writer. There wasn't a flat spot anywhere in the piece. All the plot threads were interwoven brilliantly to form a beautiful tapestry. I sense a Kerth nomination in the future.


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing