Hahaha!!! Great start, DJ! I don't have any time at all for any in-depth feedback - I'm off to London in 2½ hours for Chrissakes!!! - but I absolutely loved it. Great Lois POV!!!! Loved Clark's squirming!!
(And I loved her sniffing Clark's shirt and fantasizing. Sigh! I wish this was the nfic folder, but since it isn't, I'm not going to complain about anything, just grumble quietly under my breath.)
Ah, but seriously, I love this, DJ!!!!!
Ann
