It was very intriguing, but I must say I was a little confused indeed. Though after reading MetroRhodes' thoughts, everything makes perfect sense
"God, I love..." Irony, right?
Duh! Didn't even cross my mind.
It's a story for smart readers, and unfortunately, I'm not one
It has the potential to become a great epic, if you decide to expand it. Though I'd understand if you don't (/me loves these teaser one-parters as well *g*).
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
