hey annie. nice set-up.
wow, lana is evil (well, there are a few other words that come to mind, but i won't actually use them...

).
way to get lois jealous and frustrated, tho.
like the chapter titles, too.
"Chapter 2: Barbarian at the Planet"
fun.
poor clark, though. he doesn't know what he's in for.
and yowch. i hope jimmy's head is still attached to the rest of his body in part 2...
looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Paul