Don't change it! It was a great story. I'd just like a warning. No, it wasn't our Clark and Lois that died, but a Clark and Lois did die.
I have nothing against a character or an alt character being dead. One is dead in my story, and since it was the first story I'd ever posted, I made the very same mistake. I hadn't even thought about it because Lois didn't actually die in the story - she was already dead.
I was glad that someone asked me to post a wham and I did. I may have lost readers because of it, but now after re-introducing myself to the boards and thinking about stories I've read here and other stories I've read in the various archives, a Wham warning is a good thing. It prepares your emotions.
Also when I said this:
Lex Luthor killed Superman.
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Oh, no, no, no, nonononononononoononononono
I was not suggesting that should
not have happened. I was just expressing my emotions...
On another note, there are some huge discussions going on on the boards about deathfics right now. They are very interesting...
It was a great story!
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